Superseded — retired 2026-06-26

This copy audit is a read-only alignment artifact retired as of 2026-06-26. The live prototype has evolved roughly ten days past this 2026-06-16 audit: several recommendations here are already applied verbatim in the prototype (e.g. the plan-01 subtitle and plan-03 "Planned build order"). The interactive decision controls on this page are no longer consumed.

The live prototype is now the source of truth: Open the Deployment Plan First prototype.

prototype tier superseded

Player Copy Audit - Deployment Plan

Alignment date: 2026-06-16 · Page id: player-copy-audit-deployment-plan-first · Product path: unthinkable

This review checklist audits persistent and player-facing copy for the Deployment Plan prototype. Use it to approve each recommendation, request revisions, defer it, or reject it before any prototype copy changes are made.

Audit Standard

Copy should make the fixed scenario deck, command-post unlocks, recovery adaptation, and planned-versus-actual comparison legible without prescribing strategy or implying deck editing.

Source Prototype

prototypes/unthinkable/tactical-battle/deployment-plan-first/index.html

Open prototype

Acceptance Checks

Every high-priority item has an explicit decision, notes are captured where needed, and compiled output lists unanswered item ids.

Compiled Responses

The compiled block includes one response per reviewed item and a list of unanswered item ids.